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Let me move you

I want to move you with my words,

The words tapping,

Like the rain falling,


I wonder if you know how much you hurt me,

Or even care,

Like a knife to the heart,


You inject fear,

Straight to the brain,

Hitting the veins of life.

Comments on: "Let me move you" (4)

  1. Martin Shone said:

    Oh a very very sharp poem. It’s like you’ve fired it from your bow and wham! Bullseye.

  2. thawritergirl said:

    I relate to this.. Nice one hun…

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