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I was given another theme to write a poem about, what do you think?


Hand in soil,

Back breaking work,

The job was done,

Then man brought a machine along,

Pounding the earth all day long,

Soon the work for people had all gone.


Comments on: "People Versus the Globalisation of Machinery" (5)

  1. Martin Shone said:

    Tough theme, I wouldn’t attempt it, good one.

  2. Nice ironic ending!

  3. I’m impressed by the simple beauty of this short poem. I should have made it clearer that i meant the theme to be about ‘corporate globalisation in 21st century v the individual person, struggling to make ends meet, i think.
    Thank you ,x

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