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I can predict your death

Show me your hand,

It doesn’t look good,

Aging badly,

Quite pale,

Are you eating well?

You’ve biting your nails,

Are you nervous?

Stressed or anxious,

Have you seen the doctor lately?

Oh my there shrivelling rapidly,

Time has passed,

As we lay you to rest.


Comments on: "I can predict your death" (2)

  1. Yes, we give outward signs of our inner condition, both physically and spiritually. A much needed reminder in this poem today. Thank you.

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