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Inside my head

 

Fears, tears,

Conscious, solace

Command, conquer,

Happiness, fruitfulness,

Poor, looser

Burnt into the eyelids,

Read every time.

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Comments on: "Inside my head" (6)

  1. You’re not a loser, not poor, Kirsty – a sad poem indeed yet brilliantly written – those last two lines.

  2. Kirsty, keep faxing/emailing/tweeting/ these words back to the inside of your eyelids:

    Conscious, solace
    Command, conquer,
    Happiness, fruitfulness

    Make them your mantra! Anyone who can write this post has definitely earned the rights on this mantra!

    You are so wise to understand how we write our own “scripts”!

  3. Love them all – your words sooth and have laughter in them.

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